Problems with Sentence Structure

Sentence Fragments

Run-On Sentences and Comma Splices

SENTENCE FRAGMENTS

A general rule: Every COMPLETE sentence must have a subject and a verb and must express a complete thought. A word group which lacks a subject or a verb or which does not express a complete thought is a FRAGMENT.

Following are the most common types of fragments:

1. Dependent-word fragments

2. "-ing" and "to" fragments

3. Added-detail fragments

4. Missing-subject fragments

5. Missing verb fragments


1. Dependent-word fragments:

Some word groups which begin with a dependent word are fragments. Here is a list of common dependent words:

after, how, until, although, though, if, even, if what, whatever and, in order, that when, whenever as nor where, wherever because or whether before since which, whichever but so while even though that, so that who for unless whose yet

Whenever you start a sentence with one of these words, you must be careful that a fragment does not result.

In the following, the word group beginning with the dependent word After is a fragment:

After I stopped drinking coffee. I began sleeping better at night.

When the writer does not complete the thought, a fragment results.

To correct the fragment above, simply complete the thought. Join both sentences together and change the period to a comma, as follows:

After I stopped drinking coffee, I began sleeping better at night.

REMEMBER! Dependent statements by themselves are fragments: they must be attached to a statement that makes sense standing alone.


2. "-ing" and "to" fragments:

When there is an "-ing" word at or near the start of a word group, a fragment may result. Such fragments often lack a subject and part of the verb.

For example:

Trying to find a suitable job. I spent all day in the employment office.

"Trying to find a suitable job" is a fragment because it lacks a subject and part of the verb. We can correct the mistake in the above example in the following way: I spent all day in the employment office, trying to find a suitable job.

When "to" appears at or near the start of a word group, a fragment often results:

To remind people of their selfishness. Edward leaves handwritten

notes on cars that take up two parking spaces.

"To remind people of their selfishness" is a fragment because no verb is needed when an infinitive is the subject. We can correct this mistake as follows:

To remind people of their selfishness, Edward leaves handwritten

notes on cars that take up two parking spaces.


3. Added-detail fragments:

Added-detail fragments lack a subject and a verb. They often begin with one of the following words:

also

except

including

especially

for example

such as

Look at the following example:

Tony has trouble accepting criticism. Except from Anna. She has a knack for tact.

This is how we correct the example above. You must attach the fragment to the complete thought which comes before it. Therefore, the selection above should be:

Tony has trouble accepting criticism, except from Anna. She has a knack for tact.


4. Missing-subject fragments:

People often say and write missing-subject fragments because they think the subject in one sentence will apply to the next word group as well. However, the subject, as well as the verb, must be in each word group to make it a sentence.

For example:

My father eats breakfast every day. And has a good lunch, too.

We can correct the example above by simply attaching the fragment to the preceding sentence.

Thus: My father eats breakfast every day and has a good lunch, too.

Another example:

The student yelled as he waved to his friends. Then, with a loud whistle, got their attention.

By adding a subject such as a pronoun standing for the subject in the preceding sentence, we can correct the selection above as follows:

The student yelled as he waved to his friends.

Then, with a loud whistle, he got their attention.


5. Missing verb fragments:

People also often say or write missing verb fragments, often because they simply forget the verb. For example: My mother the nicest person I know. We can correct this problem by simply inserting the verb into the sentence thus:

My mother is the nicest person I know.


RUN-ON SENTENCES AND COMMA SPLICES

A run-on sentence, which is a serious grammatical error, consists of two complete thoughts which are run together with no punctuation given to mark the break between them. Such run-ons are known as FUSED SENTENCES. They are fused, or joined together, as if they were only one thought. For example, look at these two fused sentences:

The exam was postponed the class was cancelled as well.

In other run-ons, known as comma splices, a comma is incorrectly used to connect, or "splice together," two complete thoughts. However, a comma alone is not enough to separate two complete sentences. A punctuation sign stronger than a comma, such as a period, is needed. Here are two examples of comma splices:

Rita decided to stop smoking, she didn’t want to die of lung cancer.

The exam was postponed, the class was canceled as well.

To correct a run-on there are several options:

1. USE A PERIOD [.] AND A CAPITAL LETTER TO SEPARATE THE TWO THOUGHTS:

Rita decided to stop smoking. She didn’t want to die of lung cancer.

The exam was postponed. The class was canceled as well.

2. USE A COMMA [,] PLUS A JOINING WORD CALLED a CONJUNCTION

SUCH AS:

and but for or nor so yet

TO CONNECT THE TWO COMPLETE THOUGHTS:

Rita decided to stop smoking, for she didn’t want to die of lung cancer.

The exam was postponed, and the class was canceled as well.

3. USE A SEMICOLON [;] TO CONNECT THE TWO COMPLETE THOUGHTS:

Rita decided to stop smoking; she didn’t want to die of lung cancer.

The exam was postponed; the class was canceled as well.

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